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Monday, 19 May 2014

Purpose: Describe a moment in time for the soldiers.
WALT : Describe what and how the ANZAC soldiers would have:
1- Seen, 2- Felt, 3-Heard, 4- Smelt onboard the ship as they waved    
                     goodbye to their loved ones on their way to WAR!


As I sat on the edge of the large, hard steel ship with my legs dangling limply over board I could see…….

My family hugging and crying together.

I felt… like my world was falling  to parts.

I could hear...soldiers sobbing beside me.

I could smell… salty ocean water fuel and smoke.

I was thinking… how dare they do this to me and my family.


By Isley    
15.5.14
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